we had to show a rough cut movie to show how much work has been done on our final project, I didn't really like the session to be honest, they said a lot of annoying things to us *aghh*
rough cut movie from spikystar on Vimeo
the "suggestions" I got were:
the character should open the box at the start, see the toy inside and then smile before picking it up, they thought it was weird he was smiling right from the start...er, what?
The toy should hit him on the head more than once, maybe about three times before it gets eaten
I can probably do the second option without too much problem if I want to but the first option, the opening the box thing, I don't know why I feel unsure about that, unless if that's going to make something better..?? I just think it's not like having the box already open doesn't make sense or makes the whole thing hard to understand. I dunno, if I can get away with it I'd rather leave as it is cos I didn't see it as much of an issue :-/
Friday, 25 May 2007
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Hey :D I checked out the animatic! It's really amusing :D Good stuff.
God knows what they mean about the beginning, I'd be smiling if I had a new toy... in or out of the the box. To have him not smiling suggests he has no idea what's in the box which doesn't make sense.
I think I agree with the second point though, it would make sense for him to get even more annoyed before he eats it!
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