Sunday, 28 October 2007

okay, as promised...new stuff

Character sheet for Kiba


storyboard for the animation I've been working on

Title: Kiba's Playtime
Format: 2D Flash Animation
Duration: approx 5minute or less

Part1


Part2


the storyboard image had to resized in scale, I hope the texts are readable!
Posted by spikey star at 18:44

3 comments:

messytimbo said...

cool! i really like your designs! and i like the story as well.

i the only thing that i can see might need improving is where he walks off and then comes back as a girl. i think that there needs to a be an indication of time passing between the point that he leaves to the point that he comes back. i think that it would make it seem like he's thought about how he might be able to play with the two girls. also i gives a tiny bit of anticipation to he's return. how you might do that i'm not sure, maybe you pan up to the sky and there's a transition from one shot to another and you see the sun in a different part of the sky, maybe the sky changes colour a bit also. i'm not sure.

or maybe you think i'm talking crap! hahahaha, anyways i hope that helped a little, if not, i'm glad to see that your still animating. keep it up i can't wait to see the animatic!

28 October 2007 23:46
messytimbo said...

ooh p.s have you read kiba kiba. it's a japanese childrens book by illustrated by takashi murakami. i really love the story and the illustrations

the name of the character reminded me of the story

28 October 2007 23:48
libra bear said...

So after all these years, you decide to post LOL. My opinion, Lily is a bitch and Kiba is confused LOL just kidding, It's a cool story, made me laugh, I thought it was going o have a corny ending but it didn't. Kiba looks soo out of place in a dress. I agree with tims comment. Welcome back to Blog.

06 November 2007 20:49

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